時態飄移
WRONG Yesterday I go to the library and was studying until ten.
RIGHT Yesterday I went to the library and studied until ten.
敘事主線用過去;習慣/真理才用現在。Story 題最易犯。
寫作 Language 分最常扣在這些。改卷時先掃這些模式。
WRONG Yesterday I go to the library and was studying until ten.
RIGHT Yesterday I went to the library and studied until ten.
敘事主線用過去;習慣/真理才用現在。Story 題最易犯。
WRONG The number of complaints have dropped.
RIGHT The number of complaints has dropped.
the number of + 複數名詞 → 單數動詞;a number of → 複數。
WRONG Because the fountain was broken. Students were late.
RIGHT Because the fountain was broken, students were late.
Because / Although 不能單獨成句。
WRONG The room is small, it is always full.
RIGHT The room is small, but it is always full. / The room is small; it is always full.
兩個獨立子句不能只靠逗號。
WRONG I am writing to principal about the problem.
RIGHT I am writing to the principal about the problem.
特指的職位、文件、會議前通常要 the。
WRONG We discussed about the plan in last Monday.
RIGHT We discussed the plan last Monday.
discuss 不加 about;last Monday 前不加 in。
WRONG The student which scored full marks sat at the back.
RIGHT The student who scored full marks sat at the back.
人用 who/that,物用 which/that。
WRONG This will definitely solve all traffic in Hong Kong.
RIGHT This would ease congestion on a few corridors, if enough people switch.
宜用 may / tend to / in many cases。
WRONG If the school will open the room, more students come.
RIGHT If the school opens the room, more students will come.
If + 現在,主句 will。不要 If + will。
WRONG This plan is more better than the old one.
RIGHT This plan is better than the old one. / much better
better 已是比較級,不加 more。
WRONG Informations are useful. We need more staffs.
RIGHT The information is useful. We need more staff.
information / advice / furniture / staff 通常不可數。
WRONG The trial was happened last autumn.
RIGHT The trial happened last autumn. / The trial was held last autumn.
happen / occur / take place 不用被動。
WRONG The school must to hire a guard. Students should can leave at 11.
RIGHT The school must hire a guard. Students should be able to leave at 11.
modal 後接原形;能力用 be able to 而非 should can。
WRONG In my personal opinion, I think that it is very extremely important.
RIGHT This matters because…
opinion 不必疊 I think;very extremely 刪一個。
WRONG Hey Principal, the fountain is dead lol please fix ASAP thx.
RIGHT Dear Ms Chan, I am writing to report that the fountain has been out of order since Monday…
收件人決定 slang 可否出現。校長/公司=正式。
WRONG Walking into the hall, the trophy was shining.
RIGHT Walking into the hall, we saw the trophy shining.
分詞主語須與主句主語一致。
Furthermore, · In addition, · What is more, · Not only… but also…
However, · Nevertheless, · In contrast, · On the other hand,
Although… · Even if… · That said, · Admittedly,…
because · since · given that · owing to
Therefore, · As a result, · Consequently, · This means that…
For instance, · A case in point is… · Take… as an example.
In particular, · Above all, · It is precisely because…
In short, · On balance, · Taken together,