英國語文

Grammar traps

寫作 Language 分最常扣在這些。改卷時先掃這些模式。

時態飄移

WRONG Yesterday I go to the library and was studying until ten.

RIGHT Yesterday I went to the library and studied until ten.

敘事主線用過去;習慣/真理才用現在。Story 題最易犯。

主謂一致

WRONG The number of complaints have dropped.

RIGHT The number of complaints has dropped.

the number of + 複數名詞 → 單數動詞;a number of → 複數。

句子片段

WRONG Because the fountain was broken. Students were late.

RIGHT Because the fountain was broken, students were late.

Because / Although 不能單獨成句。

Run-on

WRONG The room is small, it is always full.

RIGHT The room is small, but it is always full. / The room is small; it is always full.

兩個獨立子句不能只靠逗號。

冠詞

WRONG I am writing to principal about the problem.

RIGHT I am writing to the principal about the problem.

特指的職位、文件、會議前通常要 the。

介詞

WRONG We discussed about the plan in last Monday.

RIGHT We discussed the plan last Monday.

discuss 不加 about;last Monday 前不加 in。

關係子句

WRONG The student which scored full marks sat at the back.

RIGHT The student who scored full marks sat at the back.

人用 who/that,物用 which/that。

語氣過滿

WRONG This will definitely solve all traffic in Hong Kong.

RIGHT This would ease congestion on a few corridors, if enough people switch.

宜用 may / tend to / in many cases。

If 條件句

WRONG If the school will open the room, more students come.

RIGHT If the school opens the room, more students will come.

If + 現在,主句 will。不要 If + will。

比較級

WRONG This plan is more better than the old one.

RIGHT This plan is better than the old one. / much better

better 已是比較級,不加 more。

可數/不可數

WRONG Informations are useful. We need more staffs.

RIGHT The information is useful. We need more staff.

information / advice / furniture / staff 通常不可數。

被動

WRONG The trial was happened last autumn.

RIGHT The trial happened last autumn. / The trial was held last autumn.

happen / occur / take place 不用被動。

情態動詞

WRONG The school must to hire a guard. Students should can leave at 11.

RIGHT The school must hire a guard. Students should be able to leave at 11.

modal 後接原形;能力用 be able to 而非 should can。

冗詞

WRONG In my personal opinion, I think that it is very extremely important.

RIGHT This matters because…

opinion 不必疊 I think;very extremely 刪一個。

語域

WRONG Hey Principal, the fountain is dead lol please fix ASAP thx.

RIGHT Dear Ms Chan, I am writing to report that the fountain has been out of order since Monday…

收件人決定 slang 可否出現。校長/公司=正式。

分詞誤掛

WRONG Walking into the hall, the trophy was shining.

RIGHT Walking into the hall, we saw the trophy shining.

分詞主語須與主句主語一致。

連接詞(勿每段 Firstly)

Adding

Furthermore, · In addition, · What is more, · Not only… but also…

Contrast

However, · Nevertheless, · In contrast, · On the other hand,

Concession

Although… · Even if… · That said, · Admittedly,…

Cause

because · since · given that · owing to

Result

Therefore, · As a result, · Consequently, · This means that…

Example

For instance, · A case in point is… · Take… as an example.

Emphasis

In particular, · Above all, · It is precisely because…

Conclusion

In short, · On balance, · Taken together,