Writing

Paper 2 Part B;學校雜誌、青年網站 · 約 400 字

Article / Blog

Audience: 同學或公眾,非老師. 吸引閱讀 + 資訊/說服

結構

  1. 1

    Title

    具體、可帶問句或對比。避免 My Article on Pollution。

  2. 2

    Hook

    場景、數據或反常識一句。立刻告訴讀者這篇關他事。

  3. 3

    Body

    兩至三個小標題亦可。例子要可見(地鐵、校巴、手機螢幕),勿空喊 should。

  4. 4

    Ending

    call to action 或回扣開頭場景。

句式

  • Picture this: …
  • What nobody tells S.4 students is that…
  • The fix is smaller than it sounds: …
  • Next time you…, try … instead.

範文(原創短示範)

Put the phone in another room — a small experiment

The night before a test, my phone sat on the desk “just in case”. By midnight I knew the names of three stray cats in Sham Shui Po and nothing about electrolysis. I tried a dull trick for one week: the phone charged in the kitchen, not beside the bed. The first two nights felt rude, as if I had snubbed a friend. Then the evenings grew longer. I finished a chapter. I slept before one. This is not a sermon against the internet. It is a reminder that attention leaks in millilitres. If the device is in another room, you have to stand up to leak. Most of the time, you will not bother — and that is the whole point. Try it before the next exam week. The cats will still be there in the morning.

Checklist

  • 有標題
  • 開頭不抄題
  • 有具體場景
  • 結尾有回扣或行動

失分點

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