Writing

Paper 2 Part B · 約 400 字

Story / Recount

Audience: 故事讀者. 完整敘事弧:衝突→高潮→收束,時態一致

結構

  1. 1

    Opening

    時間地點人物 + 異常。避免 Long long ago。

  2. 2

    Rising action

    問題升級,用對話與感官細節,每句推進情節。

  3. 3

    Climax

    一個決定或意外。不要用 then I woke up。

  4. 4

    Resolution

    後果 + 一句感悟即可,勿寫成通識結論段。

句式

  • The last MTR train had already gone when…
  • I should have walked away. Instead I…
  • Nobody spoke for a full five seconds.
  • By the time the corridor lights came on, …

範文(原創短示範)

The umbrella that was not mine

Rain hammered the covered walkway outside the public library. I grabbed a black umbrella from the stand — ours, I thought — and ran for the minibus. At the door, a girl my age said, “That’s my tape on the handle.” A strip of faded washi, cats wearing raincoats. I had never seen it. My ears went hot. I held the umbrella out with both hands, like a confession. She did not snatch it. She tilted it so we both fitted, and we walked to the stop without discussing justice. On the minibus I stared at my wet sleeves and understood how easily a person can be sure and wrong at the same time. The next Saturday I bought a cheap yellow umbrella that nobody else would want. I still look for cats on other people’s handles.

Checklist

  • 過去時為主
  • 有衝突
  • 高潮不是夢
  • 結尾短而具體

失分點

  • 只有對話沒有場景
  • 時態在過去與現在之間跳
  • 結局是一場夢
  • 人名過多卻沒有衝突